Great news! I have a release date for Cargon: Honor and Privilege! You can currently pre-order your copy to arrive May 2nd! And the second and third volumes will also release before June. I hope you'll consider picking up a copy. For now, these are my 8 sentences, the same each of the other Weekend Writing Warriors post for your perusal and enjoyment! In the last, Eve had asked about cleaning the board, but instead, she veers in another direction.
Make the most of what she had been given. She wanted to take her first step on a road to a new life, a new place. But she had been ordered to never touch the pieces. Her mind warred with her instincts. As proven in the past, her mind was stronger.
Eve took a marble piece in her hand and held it tightly. She could feel every edge, every plane. The corners seemed to bite into her skin. Small, it had little weight and yet felt exceedingly heavy, as though she held the world in her hand instead of a tiny piece.
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Amazing how an object could make her feel so torn. Congrats on your upcoming release! A beautiful cover! :)
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Thank you! I'm very excited to see these on shelves again.
DeleteBest wishes on your new release. Fine snippet. You made me feel the weight of the object in her hand.
ReplyDeleteThank you. It is meant to be momentous.
DeleteI Hope touching it doesn't goof things up for her! Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteNot foul exactly, but definitely change things!
DeleteI forgot to mention that I think the cover is gorgeous! Best wishes on the release!
DeleteMaybe she is holding the metaphoric weight of the world. Congrats on your upcoming release.
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That's exactly what I was going for. Yay!
DeleteI'm with Daryl on this one. I suspect there is much more to this game! Congratulations on your upcoming Release, Kimberly
ReplyDeleteToo True. And thank you!
DeleteI'm with Daryl on this one. I suspect there is much more to this game! Congratulations on your upcoming Release, Kimberly
ReplyDeleteAlways fascinating and I'm loving the development of the game, because I too think there must be more to it! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteYes, the game is very important to her society.
DeleteAn intriguing snippet. Good luck with the launch.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm looking forward to it.
DeleteCongrats on your upcoming release. This is a fascinating story. So much subcontext. I'm curious to know what happens next.
ReplyDeleteGreat description in this scene. Congrats on your release date! It's an eye-catching cover! :)
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling she's just taken a big step here ...
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the release. I like your descriptions here.
ReplyDeleteLovely description. This feels like a major step she just took.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your release! Interesting that the piece is both light and heavy, not only physical description, but mental one as well. Well done!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your upcoming release. Great imagery in this scene.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your upcoming release! :D
ReplyDeleteShe better make sure no one sees her messing with the game!
ReplyDeleteAnd congrats! :)
I suspect the board pieces have special power...
ReplyDeleteIf someone catches her she's going to be in trouble. Great snippet!
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