I laugh at that thought; I wouldn’t accept death, and I’m not dead! How funny is that? Pouring on a little more speed, I start to get into the flow of traffic, weaving through it. It’s familiar even though I haven’t experienced in a long time.
Can I kill Evans without getting caught? I could use a blade, maybe one from his own house. They might be able to trace it to me, but nothing connects me to him. I wouldn’t even know his name except that we began using it as a curse word, “For Evans sake!”
A charming play on words.
ReplyDeleteGives some interesting insight into what this character has been through.
ReplyDelete"For Evans sake!" Love it, Kimmydon!! One should aspire to have their name part of a curse phrase!
ReplyDeleteI don't think it will be as easy as she hopes. ;)
ReplyDeleteI like her confidence but I'm with Amy, probably not going to be as easy as she hopes. Many twists and turns ahead, no doubt, but I love it! Such a cool story concept.
ReplyDeleteFrom everyone else's POV, she'll look like a mad woman. Great build up to this point.
ReplyDeleteOh, wow! She sounds like a girl on a mission. But will she succeed?
ReplyDeleteI love how calm and cool she is while thinking about murdering someone. No emotion at all - "just the facts." Says a lot about the character and gives us good insight into her!
ReplyDeleteIf there's no connection between her and her target, why does she want to kill him? You've got me wondering.
ReplyDeleteShe's set on her course which won't be an easy one.
ReplyDeleteHmm, I'm wondering why she wants to kill him too. (And I'll forgive you for using my name in vain LOL (Hywela Lyn being my first two names, now you know my surname as well! :) ) Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteI think she'd better come up with a plan. Otherwise, disaster will follow.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if she wonders if she can change the past and therefore the future? Very cool concept, like Terminator 2.
ReplyDeleteYou get a certain mindset when survival is your focus. You capture it perfectly!
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