None of that tells me where he lives or what hours he works. I pull my Mom’s phone out of the glove box and start searching online. God, how nice is it to have internet? Now that I know where he lives, I can just wait for him to come home.
Flying through my hometown gives me a twinge of home sickness and regret. It will burn down in a few weeks. Adults living alone will leave things turned on when the virus claims them and the firemen that would normally help will be busy eating one another. If they head to fires, it’ll be with a taste for cooked meat. Oddly enough, it will be a blessing. Those of us who still have brains will be able to group while the meat sacks flee or burn.
Creepy, which makes for a compelling read.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely author with a nutty mind, killing folks and fires and stuff.You are a wonder!
ReplyDeleteI'd want to stop that from happening, too. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSuch a grim scenario, and really well drawn!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderfully grisly outlook! But so totally appropriate for survival. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThings don't seem to be going well... great snippet!
ReplyDeleteHer attitude is so grimly realistic and in such stark contrast to the everyday world she came back to, which I LOVE. Nice effect, great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThat detail about the firemen is wonderfully gruesome. All of this helps us to understand how she could be so determined to murder this guy.
ReplyDeleteShe's become quite cynical. Deservedly so, of course.
ReplyDeleteQuite a gruesome image you painted but then it had been her reality and she doesn't want a repeat. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if she's become a bit cynical or if she's just being practical. Nice excerpt.
ReplyDeleteInteresting excerpt, albeit a little creepy.
ReplyDeleteLove the way the impending doom is depicted.
ReplyDeleteThis snippet is so gruesome. I know it's her way of surviving.
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with everyone, a gruesome excerpt but something she has to come to grips with and so does the reader, makes very compelling reading!
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